#1 i think this is compositionally my favorite. it's just a unique view of pool noodles I woldn't have thought to take. What's interesting about a pile of pool noodles, yet you captured it! great job. I might punch up the color or the exposure just a touch to make it pop (try levels and sliding the white triangle over just a touch) or brightness contrast and upping the brightness. Or, you can try hue/saturation and punch up the saturation just a touch. #2 again good placement of the flower in the lower left corner. I like the detail of teh shadwow of the stamen/pistil on the petals. gorgeous. It could even be interesting cropped in realy tight so the petals fall off the edge of the photo. it's just something to consider. #3 Nicely composed with the dock on the left leading your eye deeper into the photo. I like the lampost in the foreground-- adds interest #4I again find this beautiful with the bright blue sky (what a perfect sky!) the beauty of the bird's neck line leading you downward, and the x of the roof's edge leading your eye back upward. nicely done. good placement of the bird on the left 1/3 line, too, with his head pointing into the photograph. #5 and who said still life photography is boring? this looks like a painting to me, and the shadow on the wall and the light makes the photo. The time of day makes this photo. A different time of day may have changed the color of the light and definitely the angle. Nicely timed.
#1 i think this is compositionally my favorite. it's just a unique view of pool noodles I woldn't have thought to take. What's interesting about a pile of pool noodles, yet you captured it! great job. I might punch up the color or the exposure just a touch to make it pop (try levels and sliding the white triangle over just a touch) or brightness contrast and upping the brightness. Or, you can try hue/saturation and punch up the saturation just a touch.
ReplyDelete#2 again good placement of the flower in the lower left corner. I like the detail of teh shadwow of the stamen/pistil on the petals. gorgeous. It could even be interesting cropped in realy tight so the petals fall off the edge of the photo. it's just something to consider.
#3 Nicely composed with the dock on the left leading your eye deeper into the photo. I like the lampost in the foreground-- adds interest
#4I again find this beautiful with the bright blue sky (what a perfect sky!) the beauty of the bird's neck line leading you downward, and the x of the roof's edge leading your eye back upward. nicely done. good placement of the bird on the left 1/3 line, too, with his head pointing into the photograph.
#5 and who said still life photography is boring? this looks like a painting to me, and the shadow on the wall and the light makes the photo. The time of day makes this photo. A different time of day may have changed the color of the light and definitely the angle. Nicely timed.